The Secret Painting
6B Wincy Pun


    Once upon a time, there was a little girl named Sally who was ten years old.  One day, she went to her uncle, Mr Hui’s house with her parents.  Mr Hui lived in an enormous house which was full of different beautiful paintings so she was amazed by it.  “What a magnificent house!’ she thought.


    While Sally’s parents were chatting with her uncle, Sally went around the house.  Sally discovered that one of the paintings was strange.  She tried to touch it but she couldn’t.  Suddenly, she saw two dogs jump into that painting.  Therefore, she climbed in it with amazement.    


    Sally saw everything moving in the painting.  There was a pet shop.  She immediately saw the two dogs which were very weak.  She wept for them and decided to take care of them.  Soon, the two dogs became strong and healthy.  Suddenly, the shopkeeper saw Sally.  He was very angry and chased Sally.  Sally was scared.  She needed to seek the way out or she would get caught.  Sally ran as fast as she could.  Her face turned red like an apple.  The two dogs came to help Sally.  They led her to the entrance which was the frame of the painting.  Sally climbed out of the painting with the two dogs.  She went downstairs to find her parents at once.


    When Sally’s parents saw her, they were as happy as a king.  She had been away from them for three hours.  She missed the two cute dogs badly.  Therefore, she got her parents’ permission and brought the two friendly dogs home.


    We should give love and care to everyone in need.  Sally gave love and care to the two dogs so they helped Sally at last.  They became friends.  We should be loving and caring if we want to have more friends who will help you when you are in need.